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New track, feedback appreciated :)
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| EddieZilker |
| I think you need to save the track and then post a link to that. The link currently posted goes to your drop-box. |
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| EddieZilker |
Snare's a little too dominant, in the mix.
Muted snare attack build doesn't work so well, for me.
Repeated chord progression is getting irritating. Needs a major change/progression/expansion.
Other than that, though, I'm kind of liking this tune. |
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| Mercenery |
| hey thanks....gonna see what i can come up with as far as a change in chord progression...and ill tone down the snare aswell.and probably ditch the snare attack..was actually a last minute thing...thanks for the constructive feedback :)... |
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| Nemesis44 |
Agree with Ed on the snare comments. I also think that the sample used is a bit cookie cutter. If you are going to start off muted with a snare, you would be better off opening up the filter and let the high and come in just before the beat kicks back in.
The clap/snare also needs to come down as mentioned.
The overall progression gets a bit samey after a while and needs more variation, or atleast needs to be a catchier hook for it to survive with that kind of repetition.
It has potential though and I don't regret listening to it. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Nem |
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