| adi_hanson |
First thing I find is that it sounds a little flat.Only the pad sound has a wide feeling.Vocals kinda sound detuned against the detuned lead ironically.
I think a few more percussive bits , especially up the mid/high scale wont go a miss to fill it out a bit.
Vocals sound like you literally found someone on the floor.Drunk or dead possibly.
Overall , not my style at all but it would fit in well somewhere if it had the touches of percs I mentioned. |
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