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-OceanWalk 120bpm- First Track still in progress
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| Mise |
Hi guys!,, well just posting a sketch of my first track, I have been working with this idea, I would like to have some feedback if possible. Let me know if you like it, you dont, o whatever you think!
cheers!
http://soundcloud.com/mise/oceanwalk-1 |
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| EddieZilker |
This is actually kind of a chill, groovy, housey tune. Drums could come up a little louder - especially the kick.
The shift in ambient tone, of the percussion loop, gets a little old. I wasn't fond of it to begin with but it seemed to compliment the bass-line for a while. After that, however, it got a little old.
Some of the other instruments coming in were a little simplistic but, really, if this is your first tune, you're not off to a bad start. |
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