Yeah so I haven't checked in here a whole lot lately but I thought i'd drop back in for some listeners. I've been working on this song the past week and i'd like to hear what you think. It's not completely done yet but it's definitely getting there.
In the beginning I thought this was from the Parade of Athletes album. I think the track is solid, definitely isn't done, but on it's way. The problem I had was around 1:54 - 2:24, it sounds like something is clashing.
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Ok so I just did a TON of work on it and changed a lot. I completely fixed the drums (in my opinion), I removed the second half melody since (to me) it sounded out of place and almost like a completely different song after I listened to it enough. There's quite a bit more in there that I changed that you'll hopefully notice as well. Anyways, check it out this time and lemme know what you think :D
