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Need help with the general direction oh where I should take this work in progress
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| Mr.Mystery |
Definitely needs some thought on the progression department, right now the middle part sounds completely detached from the rest, as if it were from a completely different track altogether.
Also, you might want to rethink some of your sound choices (drums in particular) - they have a pretty distinct MIDI/soft synth sound to them... |
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| music2dance2 |
Depends what you are trying to achieve. Sounds like a lot if different parts that could be made into separate tracks. Unless this abstract sounds is what you are after, that includes the percs to which change at the end.
The break doesnt suit the 1st half, the synths are nice so maybe incorporate those in the break some how. Interesting track though. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Need to pick some better kick samples and stuff, ones that sits proper in the mix. Envelopes are a little too loud. I say, ditch the second half, find some meat to release after the first build up (which I really like). Feels like some Pryda build up that could go boom, just needs more solid production. First synth is nice. |
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