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| Owsey2008 |
Very, very repetitive, but I really like some of your sounds! The new lead at 3.39 is nice, but perhaps too prominent. I would only like to hear more variation throughout.
Good job, man. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by Owsey2008
Very, very repetitive, but I really like some of your sounds! The new lead at 3.39 is nice, but perhaps too prominent. I would only like to hear more variation throughout.
Good job, man. |
yeah its no epic the idea off it was to get you listing to the sounds in the track and leave something to the Imagination:p thanks for taking a listen:thepirate |
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| EddieZilker |
| Really liking this. Has a very hypnotic quality to it that's really enjoyable. Love the atmosphere work in it, too. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Really liking this. Has a very hypnotic quality to it that's really enjoyable. Love the atmosphere work in it, too. |
cool im glad someone got it there is a fine art between repetitive and hypnotic so i think i cracked it :p thanks for the listen |
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| novastorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by owien
yeah its no epic the idea off it was to get you listing to the sounds in the track and leave something to the Imagination:p thanks for taking a listen:thepirate |
That's interesting what you say about leaving something to the listener's imagination, I'm glad I read that before hitting play because otherwise I may have found this a bit dull. The lead and the ambient background textures drew me in the most, I found myself trying to figure out what story they were telling and how they related to the strange track title and then letting the imagery flow from that, so I guess in that sense it is quite hypnotic. The slow bpm helps with that too. Interesting one, thanks for sharing :) |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by novastorm
That's interesting what you say about leaving something to the listener's imagination, I'm glad I read that before hitting play because otherwise I may have found this a bit dull. The lead and the ambient background textures drew me in the most, I found myself trying to figure out what story they were telling and how they related to the strange track title and then letting the imagery flow from that, so I guess in that sense it is quite hypnotic. The slow bpm helps with that too. Interesting one, thanks for sharing :) |
no worries the track took me a few days to make so not very long i wanted to get somthing across without the normal filling it with lots of .
thanks for the listen :p |
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| msz |
i like the elements in the track but...
sounds like a half-assed track to me, that being said i think its a good base. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by msz
i like the elements in the track but...
sounds like a half-assed track to me, that being said i think its a good base. |
haha you got me im currently using new software and im also in a place where i cant really decide what tunes to make these days lol :rolleyes: :rolleyes: anyway thanks for the listen |
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| msz |
| sorry dont mean to sound mean if do, keep up the producin. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by msz
sorry dont mean to sound mean if do, keep up the producin. |
nope not mean its not my best work im just stepping into a new area and the funny thing is this track was made in a few days and ive had more interest then my other bigger tunes that took weeks to make lol |
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| Raphie |
I like it!
few tips:
- more variation: the percussion layers (skipping forward in SC gives the same percussion during hte whole track
- tweak or layer you ambiance sounds / pad more, reosnate, play with volume/verb etc. create a bit more texture/depth
- use that bass sound more often, but less long, now the track really has 2 chapters, i think this works better if there are like 4 shorter chapters.
furthermore well done! |
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