pros:
Good drums. Good percussion. Good use of those atmospheric sounds, I really like them. The little reverb in the break is good too.
cons:
the main stab (that TOOMMM sound since the beginning) could be more wet with some fx.
bass could get some note variations after the break.
Congratulations.
G. Cazali
that bassline and kick needs more "punch"
yea the pads are good , but ur track needs more elements
its kinda empty
and yeah like some one said in your soundcloud, there is no need of vocals ;)
tatsama
thank you both for taking the time to give me some thoughtfull feedback..much appreciated.. will take both ur reviews to the studio with me , when i work on this next ..thanx a lot guys :)
tatsama
hi..a new one..a simple deep tech track.. very little automation and fx.. wanted to make a "bare boned" track so to speak.. hope u guys enjoy it.any feedback good/bad would be helpfull.
Would benefit with more low end, the change of kick as mention & beef up the bass a bit. The pad is great and the perc's work really well. A bit more varition would complete this track, either more parts or a change in chords in the bass maybe?
music2dance2
This is nice, I'm gonna make a track in this genre at some point. I like the minimal feel, and sub bassline. I can understand the idea you had for this one.
The synth lead type part is great, nice and simple.
Nice work.
tatsama
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Originally posted by music2dance2
Would benefit with more low end, the change of kick as mention & beef up the bass a bit. The pad is great and the perc's work really well. A bit more varition would complete this track, either more parts or a change in chords in the bass maybe?
cheers mate.. any more low end and the mix will sound muddy.. the kick sounds fine to me..but i will change it and see if it helps anyway ! :)
tatsama
thank you :)
tatsama
hi..a new one..i think i have gotten the balance between instruments a bit better with this effort..lemme know what u think :)
