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4th Track ready for the shooting gallery. Tech House.
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| Stylz |
4th track, bit of a dated sound. Been trying to make music for about a year now. No musical background, so all criticisms welcome. I'm looking to improve, so let me know.
http://soundcloud.com/stylzdarnell/take-60 |
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| music2dance2 |
Cant comment too much on the mix due to the speakers I have on right now. Starts of ok, nice bass going and arrangement is good. The stabby lead from 2:40 isnt nice, more annoying.
Work on more variation to keep it interesting as it gets repetitive, but this is going in the right direction so keep it up. |
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| meriter |
| oh man you gotta do something about the dog whistle at 30 seconds |
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| music2dance2 |
| quote: | Originally posted by meriter
oh man you gotta do something about the dog whistle at 30 seconds |
I thought that at the time. That noise is too high. People will lose interest straight away |
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