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| Gimenez |
| :-( No one? :( It sucks? |
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| EddieZilker |
Hang on, dude. I'm getting ready to review a few tracks but I need to finish up something, first.
Yeah - I know it sucks waiting for that first review. Sorry this isn't it - but it's coming - soon...
Just a little longer....
Wait for it....
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| Gimenez |
| LoL I saw the word "suck" and I am like "dang!" lol lets see how it goes... Hopefully you guys enjoy it |
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| EddieZilker |
Kick a little harsh.
Like the bass-line coming in. Should probably come up a little more - seemed under-represented.
Once the percussion kicks in, the kick doesn't seem so bad, until it drops out, again.
Love the swirly pad and the water sounds. Really lovely work, in the back-ground.
The arpeggiating lead - a little too loud? Maybe I just have mix ear. I'd hesitate to change anything until you hear my sentiments echoed.
Really kind of a cool tune and very, very original. Lots of stuff going on, here.
I've got my eye on this tune. |
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| tehlord |
I agree with teh Eddie.
The elements you've got are nice. Well chosen sounds and a good sense of space and progression.
I can't really comment on the mix levels as to my ears they all seem off. I think the entire mix needs to go back to zero faders and start again by bringing each element up from zero.
Good ideas though. |
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| Gimenez |
Thank you guys for the comments. Comments like these help greatly. I went ahead and upgraded the track. The kicks before were a little rough and took away the atmosphere. I added some extra bass and tweaked the base to sound a bit more smooth as well. I also messed with some volumes to see if it sounds better. Also made the percussion a bit easier on the track as well. Let me know what you guys think and thanks :D
I am following the advice written here |
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| mark_gg_daniels |
i like. good kick and relaxed vibe. Was there a bass in there?? didnt notice one.
Good soundgin percs. generally a professionally sounding track. cant fault it |
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| Gimenez |
| quote: | Originally posted by mark_gg_daniels
i like. good kick and relaxed vibe. Was there a bass in there?? didnt notice one.
Good soundgin percs. generally a professionally sounding track. cant fault it |
Thank you sir. HMM I put the volume down on the bass because I thought it was too loud. I guess I gotta put it higher. :D I am glad people are liking this piece. Thank you sir!
For the others who heard the song before can you check it again please? :D thanks |
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| raj84 |
Jérémy Menez (born 7 May 1987) is a French football player who currently plays for Italian club Roma in Serie A. He plays a variety of positions in the attacking midfield, most notably as a winger and a playmaker. Menez has been described as a two-footed technically skill playmaker with undeniable pace.
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| Gimenez |
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