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Dan Southward - Zero Hour Sample
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| Red Sunset |
Hey folks.....
This is a 6 minute sample of my first ever track 'Zero Hour. Made it using Fruity Loops. It's a basic track, but I'm looking to find out what you guys think of it. Where it needs improvement, what you like about it etc. Thank You
http://soundcloud.com/dansouthward/...ero-hour-sample |
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| kevin shawn |
I like the overall feel of the track, very nice vibe. Percussion sounds a little dry, maybe a little delay here and there and some reverb on the clap?
Breakdown your chord stabs could follow a progression to give some intrest. Personal opinion of course.
Very nice first track, keep at it :) |
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| EddieZilker |
What Kevin said + it could use some musical progression with percussion and some of the elements, already there.
Love the pads. The bass-line could come up by around 2-3db.
Really, this is a wonderful music bed. It just needs a few nudges more to make it into a fully fledged tune. |
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| Red Sunset |
| Thanks for your thoughts guys. I'll do some work on it tomorrow :) |
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