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My new track - Vaporize
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| tombar |
Hi, this is my new track, basicaly first one I pretty much finished after 8 years of strugling ... :)
You might think it sounds a bit retro, but I'm constantly improoving. At least will try to improove. Thank you for your constructive comments.
http://soundcloud.com/bartokt/vaporise |
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| kevin shawn |
500 views in 3 days on that track and I'm the first to comment?
Track sounds clean, I like the vibe but I want more of that main synth, your lead needs to lead :) Bring that out to the front of the mix and give your track some more personality.
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| tombar |
thanks Kevin.. most views are from link posted on Facebook and all the comments are there.
I will take your comments on board before the final mix session. |
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| theterran |
Really enjoyed this track actually.
Good use of sidechaining and melodic elements.
The beat fits well and is very energetic / tight.
Main lead does come in a bit shy/weak as does the bass. I agree that your mixing at around 3:30 destroys any energy that you've attempted to build in the track.
Also, as I've said to many many people...you cannot comment on a streamed soundcloud mix as opposed to any actual 320kbps or better download. (or .wave or ogg, but not a 128kbps processed and streamed file)
I would suggest making a 320kbps non-dithered download available if you are interested in any actual mixing feedback.
Hope that was helpful and gl with the track :) |
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| TenTwo |
Really enjoyed this track.
Really solid leads.
Sounds like the mixing could use some work at certain points, but I really can't say for certain because I'm listening with earphones.
The balance on the leads between 3.30 and 4.10 could be tweaked a bit based on what I can hear. |
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