It's been a while since i made my own original song been only remixing tracks lately :P but i made a comeback with a Dreamy Trance/Electro song with vocals! i'm looking forward to hearing some feedback & criticism. :)
Once upon a time i was alone,
There was no one beside me..
Everything i did was on my own,
Why should i care i was free..
But the i watched you in the rain,
I saw an angel standing..
There was nothing left to gain,
That's how the story's ending now..
Enjoy..
Greetings,
Rinster.
d(^_^)b
ps.. feedback will be returned :)
djjasonb
The bassline well, need a better one really, also at least one or two notes like the second is off and sounds awful for it.
Now if this was a happy hardcore tune it'd be good, its like a Pengo tune.
kevin shawn
Agreed that the bassline has got to go. Makes the track sound very dated. Like 2001 commercial trance.
The beginning I started singing this:
I like your percs and FX. Not exactly my style of trance music but I think the song is produced well.
Rinster
quote:
Originally posted by kevin shawn
Agreed that the bassline has got to go. Makes the track sound very dated. Like 2001 commercial trance.
The beginning I started singing this:
I like your percs and FX. Not exactly my style of trance music but I think the song is produced well.
haha thanks guys for the feedback.. i had a bit of trouble to find a fitting bassline.. guess im gonna make a 2nd version of the track. :) i've returned some feedback Kevin, nice tune keep it up man ;)
