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| JEO |
DEPRESSING HIGH ALERT
Calling Robby Rox |
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| Kenny Rogers |
| wrong forum. this belongs in the cor together with ******** threads. |
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| chrisspob |
| i think its funny it makes me laugh ! i love reading this forum im a dumb who makes music! i hope i amuse you i dont intend that obviously! |
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| Dj_Kile |
| popsky , very good track , it has huge potential to be a hit , work more on the break as someone said , even more on the way you come out of the break to the main event .... Also the 1st few seconds of the tune , they really set the tone , make them sound more professional , technically wise , they come across little bit thin and they need to have more depth |
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| Andy28 |
nicely produced..
My 2c..
dont like the little into, for me 58s should be the start of the tune.. 1.27 starts getting interesting has a nice groove.. Also dont like that little cut in at 2.39 then it drops to the break.. at this point i would have just lost the kick and filtered it all down to the bit at 3.28.. Straight after this point you have that rev crash thing but i think it should be brought forward sounds out of place.. from here introduce your melody, build it up and then use the bit at 5.20 to kick the tune back in (or something along those lines).
Overall i think it also lacks little fx noises here and there but it could be made into a good tune..
Nice work, hope this helps |
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| chrisspob |
| quote: | Originally posted by Dj_Kile
popsky , very good track , it has huge potential to be a hit , work more on the break as someone said , even more on the way you come out of the break to the main event .... Also the 1st few seconds of the tune , they really set the tone , make them sound more professional , technically wise , they come across little bit thin and they need to have more depth |
hey thanks man all taken into account what you said im workin on it now actuaully, the version you heard is obviously rushed i only started it last sunday and rushed alot of parts just so i cud get it to a playable standard, hopefully it will all make sense when i finish it tho cheers |
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| chrisspob |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
nicely produced..
My 2c..
dont like the little into, for me 58s should be the start of the tune.. 1.27 starts getting interesting has a nice groove.. Also dont like that little cut in at 2.39 then it drops to the break.. at this point i would have just lost the kick and filtered it all down to the bit at 3.28.. Straight after this point you have that rev crash thing but i think it should be brought forward sounds out of place.. from here introduce your melody, build it up and then use the bit at 5.20 to kick the tune back in (or something along those lines).
Overall i think it also lacks little fx noises here and there but it could be made into a good tune..
Nice work, hope this helps |
thanks pal like i said to dj kile im working onit now so what you say is gonna help me finish it to a better standerd i have ideas already for it like the main pads are gonna have a lead sound over it , but the tune you heard was looped at some parts wich dont sound pefect so thats something im working on too, i like the melody tho and dont wanna change that but im certainly looking for ideas on the outro as i did rush that just to get it finished to play at a party on sat night, thanks buddy :o) |
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| chrisspob |
| quote: | Originally posted by Andy28
nicely produced..
My 2c..
dont like the little into, for me 58s should be the start of the tune.. 1.27 starts getting interesting has a nice groove.. Also dont like that little cut in at 2.39 then it drops to the break.. at this point i would have just lost the kick and filtered it all down to the bit at 3.28.. Straight after this point you have that rev crash thing but i think it should be brought forward sounds out of place.. from here introduce your melody, build it up and then use the bit at 5.20 to kick the tune back in (or something along those lines).
Overall i think it also lacks little fx noises here and there but it could be made into a good tune..
Nice work, hope this helps |
thanks and im adressing everything you have said ill send you a clip when im done to see what you think cheers buds! |
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| G-Con |
| This is exactly the type of thread that doesn't belong in here. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by chrisspob
finaly someone being normal and just keeping to the orig post thank you, glad you like it, i was hoping for more feedback so when i finish it today it wont be a when i send it to the label |
dude just add me to facebook http://www.facebook.com/stewart.mays
makes life easy ;) |
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| Richard Butler |
| Quite a nice sonic journey - I like the part around 3.30 best - that dark arpy tone. |
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