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My new track...what do you think?
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| Richard Butler |
Typing as I listen;
First few bars opening - uber generic - that would make me skip the track right there so alter it I think
First rise has great energy
The rolling elements are quite energetic and effervescent
Mix seems good and clear and kick pounding through
Good transitions
Nice tension
Lots of good individual sounds
Break - bass note 2 sounded off once - maybe a confliction in there
Break main part - getting a bit boring - nothing is particularly grabbing me although it seems very well executed
Rise is a bit generic
Chorus - not enough energy or impact and the hats sound too thin somehow.
Id say a good piece of work well executed but not memorable in terms of melody or sound |
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| davidmclean |
| wicked, thanks for your feedback Richard - really good and helpful, so much appreciated! |
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