TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion Sylvannas - Opportunity(Original Mix) - Electronic Dance Music View this Thread in Original format sylvannas Check Out my new track.Kinda my first attempt at making EDM. Comments & Criticism are Welcome !!! http://soundcloud.com/sylvannas/opportunity sylvannas no comments or criticism? ....:conf: it would be really helpful for me if you could throw in some useful Constructive Criticism to improve the song....i am still learning(2 months old) sylvannas wow ... no comments at all :o :D i am sorry if i am not familiar with how things work around here.i am new :nervous: Seandroid quote: Originally posted by sylvannas wow ... no comments at all :o :D i am sorry if i am not familiar with how things work around here.i am new :nervous: Comment on other people' work? You're not going to get any reviews until you start doing some reviewing yourself, people will return the favour. sylvannas thnx for the tip man.will do so. sylvannas can i now get a review?..i am working on a remix of this...and decided it would be really helpful if i could get feedback on this song. This is the Link : http://soundcloud.com/sylvannas/opportunity I am quite open to any kinds of criticism(i am learning ofc xD) Richard Butler It's ok mate but nothing too memorable in terms of sounds or melody. The synths don't pump enough between the kicks either. I'm always honest. Work on getting the whole thing to gel better too. The bass sounds like it's from another track - the track thing is not a 'whole'. sylvannas quote: Originally posted by Richard Butler It's ok mate but nothing too memorable in terms of sounds or melody. The synths don't pump enough between the kicks either. I'm always honest. Work on getting the whole thing to gel better too. The bass sounds like it's from another track - the track thing is not a 'whole'. thanks a lot man. MichaelHaber Didn't you comment on a track of mine saying there wasn't enough drama? Well i'm returning the favour - It's a nice start but not enough drama. Keep at it pal. sylvannas quote: Originally posted by MichaelHaber Didn't you comment on a track of mine saying there wasn't enough drama? Well i'm returning the favour - It's a nice start but not enough drama. Keep at it pal. Will still take it.Thanks. CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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