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Need some help with arrangement on my new track
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MichaelHaber
I've been making this track intermittently this week and spent quite a while trying to figure out how to stick it all together.

Any ideas on how to improve the arrangement and for that matter any other part of this track.

Thanks in advance

http://soundcloud.com/digitalnerve/revenge-is-sweet
EddieZilker
The worst I could say, and it's me being nit-picky, is that I'd like to hear more low-end on the kick, less high-end harshness, complexity progression on the arpeggiation that comes in after the break, more hi-hats, and a completely different, lower pitched snare sound (but just finesse the snare-attack builds - the first one is win, BTW, but the second is a little flat).
MichaelHaber
Here is the refix. I took most of what you said on board (what i understood) and here is the resulting track.

Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/digitalnerve/second-revenge
Richard Butler
This track is quite nice. I like your graceful natural touch. Comming on nicely. To be critishish, I'd say some of the sounds are little weak, but no worries, that comes with time
sylvannas
Love the feel between 2:25 - 4:40.Nice :)
MichaelHaber
Thanks people

Do you think i could send this to some minor record labels? If so, anybody know of any?
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