It was 4am, I was encompassed by the warm glow of my monitor in all darkness, trying to find a way to sleep. So it motivated me to fiddle around with flstudio since I haven't touched it in months... and after listening to it as a constant loop.. it suprisingly hypnotised me into a short coma. It is basically an attempt in creating deep ambient stuff.
Yes sure!!,, that could be the motif of the tune, what you got, may work as the intro, then introducing some percussion line and bass. Work out a groove for it ;)
MSZ
definitely worth finishing off, get on it.
Subtle
Nice one, would definitely work on this... melody has great potential.
