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Subtara - The Unsolved Mystery (Original Mix) FULL 320
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| Vernon Wanderer |
Nice, thanks :happy2:
Left you some comments on soundcloud.. |
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| CREST |
hey man :)
first thing i noticed with this is the boom in the kick...and a little crunch..? not sure what that is...
when the bass comes in...and some other elements, i can hear the potential of this track...
it does seem a little static as it goes along...could definitely use some kind of movement in there...whether it be perc that pan or reberberate....
or maybe something low that comes in and out...either way...this track has a sexiness about it...like snake ...(go with me here)
...it needs more groove if you want to keep it interesting...and some groove would give it that movment it needs...some swelling of some sort...:)
?? what do you rekon? :)
i like it...its an intersting listen....cheers |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer
Nice, thanks :happy2:
Left you some comments on soundcloud.. |
Thanks! :)
| quote: | Originally posted by CREST
hey man :)
first thing i noticed with this is the boom in the kick...and a little crunch..? not sure what that is...
when the bass comes in...and some other elements, i can hear the potential of this track...
it does seem a little static as it goes along...could definitely use some kind of movement in there...whether it be perc that pan or reberberate....
or maybe something low that comes in and out...either way...this track has a sexiness about it...like snake ...(go with me here)
...it needs more groove if you want to keep it interesting...and some groove would give it that movment it needs...some swelling of some sort...:)
?? what do you rekon? :)
i like it...its an intersting listen....cheers |
Thanks for the comment.. it lacks a bit of groove.. its a bit old school sounding with the offbeat bass and all. Its a done track though, wont be working any more on it. |
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| EddieZilker |
Oh, you're setting the standard, here. I think you've got a couple of thread roaming around on page 1, don't you? This one's just been cheerfully added to my collection, sir. I suspect that other one will be on page 1 for a bit longer, as soon as I get to bumping it. :D
Lots of stuff going on and I really like the textures of the synths you're using on that panning lead. Lots of stuff going on in the back-ground, too. Love the rhythm. Mix is ace, as usual.
Nice work, sir. |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Oh, you're setting the standard, here. I think you've got a couple of thread roaming around on page 1, don't you? This one's just been cheerfully added to my collection, sir. I suspect that other one will be on page 1 for a bit longer, as soon as I get to bumping it. :D
Lots of stuff going on and I really like the textures of the synths you're using on that panning lead. Lots of stuff going on in the back-ground, too. Love the rhythm. Mix is ace, as usual.
Nice work, sir. |
Thank you very much sir, yes im churning out tracks that are finished and just lying around collecting dust. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Please check your SC site for my take on this track.
Cheers. |
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| montana |
steady groove as usual, love the way you work that percussion fill. however, that panned piano sounds weird but in a good way, it's giving that effect that it's out of tune but it's not.
that is the only good i can say, the rest i don't think much of to much. i think it's way cluttered in the mix, alot of elements doesn't cut through. that snare is awful and don't like the bass either.
sorry mate |
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| Subtle |
| quote: | Originally posted by montana
steady groove as usual, love the way you work that percussion fill. however, that panned piano sounds weird but in a good way, it's giving that effect that it's out of tune but it's not.
that is the only good i can say, the rest i don't think much of to much. i think it's way cluttered in the mix, alot of elements doesn't cut through. that snare is awful and don't like the bass either.
sorry mate |
Thanks for listening, think I understand your concerns about this track. |
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