Go to your SoundCloud page (you have to be log in) and select Tracks tab, --> go to this particular track which you would like to share with us and select first to the left option "Share" ---> go down to "Embed Code" option and select this whole text then copy and paste to your post - this will make our life much easier.
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Jernalism
Left you a few comments on Soundcloud :) Enjoyed the track!
Illumin
all of the sounds are very synced to the up and down beats, makes for a bit plain and boring listen, play around with it more!
mark_gg_daniels
Hey... thanks for feedback. I was concerned the main lead bass went on for two long in the tune and maybe just leave it till after the break and do something else for the lead up to the break.
Thanks for pointing out that you found it a little boring in places... although I dont know what you mean with the up and down beat thing? Im not good with the language of music production as everything I know is from playing with programs.
Illumin
if you count the meter when the song plays like this....one and two and three and four and one and two......all of your notes are following in this fashion...some songs work ok in this, but I think yours can have potential by moving some notes around...hope this helps