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Johann Stone - Spitfire (formerly know as Haymaker)
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| Johann Stone |
| comments and critizism would be helpful :) |
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| Raphie |
| great track, would change the delay on the crash cymbal but further great track! |
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| Richard Butler |
This is signable and excellent work mate, in fact it's exactly the style I enjoy right now.
Your mixing, especially on bass is spot on.
It flows well and held my interest with it's subbtle yet powerful development.
No crits.:gsmile: |
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| floyd741 |
Man this is pretty dirty, in a good way. I love the percy stab you got going on, it's got a pretty snazzy sharpness to it. Very nice effect work as well. Keep up the good work man  |
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| tehlord |
Not my cup of tea, but definately well made.
Kudos :cool: |
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| Owsey2008 |
| quote: | Originally posted by tehlord
Not my cup of tea, but definately well made.
Kudos :cool: |
Word. |
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| rawssssss |
| I like it. My only criticism is that I think the crash cymbal is panned a little too far to the left, but other than that, it's excellent :) |
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| davidmclean |
definately agree with other posters about the delay on the crash cymbal, i find it quite distracting so i would get rid of the delay and maybe replace with a nice long reverb or something to give it that extra space.
i really like the groove and sound of the track once everything is playing, the bass is cool and a nice unique kind of sound.
only criticism is i thought the track lacked punch and energy when everything kicked back in - would like to hear perhaps more percussion and something like a really aggressive loud synth line when the track drops to raise the energy up a level.
but great work - has a nice sound to it and pretty well mixed! |
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| Illumin |
just like the others have mentioned!
but I do like techy!!!! glad to hear this.
I think the open hi hat doesn't fit too well, or is too loud, not sure of its my headphone, but stands out to distinctly to the right.
love the bass and stabs rhythm! really like the second break and the ending fill before re-introducing the outro! |
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