1.45 till 2.09 is pure bliss, and screams for an epic stadium racer.
After that sll the proggy breakdowns and mellow stabbies are just 1 dissapointment. not bad on it's own but you have oyur best part at 1.45 and you don't leverage it acros the track.
Evolve140
Thanks dude, that helps! Glad you got some bliss from it. :) I think I can manage to fix the vagueness of the end. I too agree that part is the best. The other parts are decent on their own like you mention but seem off direction.
TranceLover007
Sorry man is taking so long to comment on your latest production, you are on my list lol, so just give me few min and I will work on it.
Cheers,
Darek
Evolve140
Thanks man, favor will be returned :)
TranceLover007
Done my friend, check your SC page.
Cheers,
Darek
Evolve140
Thanks dude! Do you find yourself agreeing with raphie about capitalizing on the "bliss" part around 1:40? Will have a re-visit tonight after a nice puff puff :)
TranceLover007
Give it a second look and work on it tonight we we see what you going to come up with - it is a lot of thing you can do to spice up this already great track.
Cheers,
Darek
Evolve140
I kind of ran out of steam and my ears tired out towards the end, gonna take a rest and check tomorrow. Did a lot of work, so interested to know what you think of the changes.
Gonna def. need a little break on this one. Ears are toast. Seems like I kinda went and ed it up a little! Hahaha!
Give me a few and I will jump on it, just finishing George Acosta mix.
Cheers,
Darek
Raphie
Sounds a lot better, i would bring the lead from the break back in after the first 8 measures (slowly fade filter it back in until epic pandemonium) everything else seems in place, just need to capitalize on your break. It might be just me, but i really hate tracks which create epic anticipation in the break and then at high noon bring back just the ing stabby support rifs which sound like backing tracks.
Evolve140
I was quite tired and kind of hungry when I was working on that. Raphie, is that what you hear in the updated version? Not sure what I hear right now. After I smoke later and eat I will be ready to re visit, but I do like to make things climatic. building energy can be the easy part sometimes, it's the release that is difficult.
