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To the end. Need some feedback
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| sicc |
So basically, I have not been producing for very long. I'm new. I'm posting this to get some constructive feed back and to here what you guys dont like and what you do like about the track.
Please don't just talk ; provide clear feedback where I can improve this track. As I said, I'm pretty new so dont expect some epic amazing track. So as I said PLEASE dont talk , just tell me where you think I can improve and what you like/dislike. My main concerns are the structure and the repetitive nature of the melody and the fact the melody has no real progression. Kind of direction less.
Its not mastered so turn your volumes UP!
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| TranceLover007 |
Don't get discourage my friend, you are still new to this site and people/member will not comment right away lol - just give them a time, comment on another people production and let them know you (from the most professional way) and good things will happen.
Will try to comment when go through with all those personal requests on SoundCloud for tracks review lol
Cheers my friend and don't take anything personal.
Cheers from Seattle,
Darek |
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| Evolve140 |
Not really digging the kick. I would duck the bassline a little so it pumps with the kick drum better. You have 2 bass synths occupying the same frequency range -- try to EQ one or the other slightly to make them fit without the bit of mud I hear. Or don't have the occur at the same time. The synths are decent, other than the frequency range being occupied by 2 bass synths at once.
The melodies are OK but they're just basic chords and patterns, though nothing is really clashing there. So the mids and highs are pretty clear but just remember about the bassline. The delayed, bit reduced bassline is decent, but it doesn't connect with the bass drum very well. And again, the track lacks groove and pump.
Not bad for a beginner, the mix down is OK, the sounds aren't too generic or cheesy sounding (the bit reduced bassline is a bit, and could use some variation) or sounding like presets, so that's good. |
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| sicc |
| Yeah I'm defiantly going to chop the kick up a bit in EQ to give it some more pump/bass. I am also going to mess with the bass a bit, change up the notes give it more groove. Thank you for your input man. I will put some work in on the EQ. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Now you can see that all of us are great people who, if is possible will help/comment and share knowledge to anybody who is serious about production and contributes his/her own time on this site - good things already start to happen for you ---> will comment tonight on your track my friend.
Cheers for now,
Darek |
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| sicc |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Now you can see that all of us are great people who, if is possible will help/comment and share knowledge to anybody who is serious about production and contributes his/her own time on this site - good things already start to happen for you ---> will comment tonight on your track my friend.
Cheers for now,
Darek |
:) thanks man. Much appreciated. I just need to be patient and have an open mind :) |
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| TranceLover007 |
Oh yes you do lol - but only if you are serious about what you do and don't expect miracles lol.
Cheers my friend,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
Done, please check your SC page.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| sicc |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Done, please check your SC page.
Cheers,
Darek |
Replied on SC to your reply as well, thanks mate. |
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