My latest track is Twine. I would describe this one as starting off with a techy rhythm then building into variations of an arpeggiated melody.
All feedback is appreciated! :)
Not bad.
Synths are pretty old school, in fact the whole lot is.
Maybe add a few more percs, think it might need a bit more drive through the track.
Well done mate.
ckz
Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it!
I'll go more "modern" for my next production :)
Tom Scott
Sounds good , but needs a bit of work it sounds to me also that the track lacks a bit of drive and perhaps depth. If i were you I would work on layering sounds through the track, a lot of the time it sounds a bit 'empty' if you know what i mean, maybe a few pads along the way or extra percussion a little bit lower down would help to fill it out.
Some layers of FX are definitely needed on this as well, whats on there already is fine but at times it could be smoother helping the track flow a tad more. That wobbly bass that pops up at times is good but overpowers the mix a little, id possibly fiddle with the levels/EQ of that to help it fit a bit more. Finally id personally layer the offbeat bassline with a bit more 'oomph' to it.
Nice sounding track, with good potential, good work :)
ckz
Hey Tom, I get the layering and FX, this track is a bit more minimal then most trance today. I'll def work on that.
Thanks for the constructive criticism :)
ckz
I have taken your suggestions and tweaked this track, check it out please and let me know!
