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| DJRYAN™ |
| I liked the beats. The hi-hats, the crashes, and even the kick were well done. The melody was thought provoking and I totally forgot that I wasn't listening to a track for a trance set I wanted to compile. A couople of things. Because of your nack for beats, which you obviously have, I'd throw a drum roll in to kick off the second part. It shouldn't take a lot. And I'd also reverb some of the cymbal crashes right before the drop too. They were a bit to prominent. Other than that, the female vocal was spot on and definitely spiced it up. I'm not an ass kisser but this was good. |
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| Owsey2008 |
| You've improved a lot since the last track I heard from you. Keep it up |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJRYAN™
I'd throw a drum roll in to kick off the second part. |
I had the same thought. :P
All of the parts came from a construction kit, so I just wanted to see what I could do with what I had.
Thanks for the the comments. |
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| CalebGolston |
| Bomb. Had to respond in a second tab so the music wouldn't stop ;) |
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| Evolve140 |
The snare and kick drop well, but there's not much of a groove.
Nice classic resolution on the chords, and I myself am a chord maestro so I really like it. It really does lack a driving groove in certain parts, the build up from 1-3 mins is great, but I really think it needs a more driving release of energy after that. The kick and snare drop well like I said, but the swung out driving perc elements aren't really there, just a weak open had in the back of the mix. You could totally drop a Super8&Tab elecro bassline or something after that buildup for maximum effect. Clean, good work. |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Owsey2008
You've improved a lot since the last track I heard from you. Keep it up |
and yeah, huge improvement. |
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| Manhattan |
| Nice track, thanks for your sharing. |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
The snare and kick drop well, but there's not much of a groove.
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Agreed.
Thank you to everyone who left a comment and listened. If you left a comment and want me to listen to your track, please send me a PM with a link to your track and/or thread on here. Thx. |
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| Excess |
i feel as if the way the plucks build up after the drop should have happened in the breakdown/buildup, and then became even more energetic once the beat drops back in.
sounding good so far though =] |
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