Hey guys, really feeling this one. Love the little electro wobbly introduction, straight into the big open filter progressive sound. Let me know what you think, I'm trying to get as inspired to finish it as I was first creating the idea.
Beatflux
Dump.
Evolve140
Has the all mighty Beatflux spoken? Pretty lame feedback if you ask me.
varun
Quite interesting!
Bass is nice, sits well with the kick.
Need to finish it though.
Sounds good so far!!
Richard Butler
I like it from 0.48 secs - in fact I've used those same mysterious chords in the past - well nice. I'd PERSONALY say build all around that from there, the wobble bass for me was not so interesting.
The break - for MY tatses needs to go off at a tangent and not just be anextension of those chords with that sound as that FOR ME is too predictable and common sounding.
Cheers
MSZ
cool, ive been listening to some electro prog lately.
ok dont listen to beatflux, thats terrible advice from a not so good producer.
however, i think you def need to reconstruct this track. your chords and synths are the best part, imo i would extend the progression, on the third chord bring it a key down, and then a final chord with resolve would make it pretty sweet i think. after the build, make it explode and you got yourself a killer track. im just working this out on paper so in practice i could be wrong ;)
Beatflux
Posting snippets like these is like posting a motif and then asking "Well, how did I do?" Some producers make a chord progression, and that's the entire track. Other producers, professional producers, take an idea and run with it creating elaborations and variations so that listeners are entertained with various takes on the primary theme. What you do with that primary idea is indicative of how creative and entertaining your track really is.
There's track that starts out with a simple chord progression and then puts a nice little electro spin on the whole progression. Maybe you've heard of it before? Ghosts n Things?
Excess
interesting concept. should be entertaining when it's fleshed out. msz's advice seems pretty solid on this one. i would also add another musical element, just make sure it's got a certain silliness to fit in with everything else. (not to say your track is silly, but it's certainly not conventional).
also to be noted, have you finished any of your projects? all ive seen from you is snippets/WIPs :conf: :conf: :(
do want whole tracks pls.
Evolve140
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
cool, ive been listening to some electro prog lately.
ok dont listen to beatflux, thats terrible advice from a not so good producer.
however, i think you def need to reconstruct this track. your chords and synths are the best part, imo i would extend the progression, on the third chord bring it a key down, and then a final chord with resolve would make it pretty sweet i think. after the build, make it explode and you got yourself a killer track. im just working this out on paper so in practice i could be wrong ;)
Thanks everyone for checking it out, I appreciate the feedback. I knew I wanted to finish the chord progression but couldn't tap into it at the time. I did something just now pretty spontaneously with the breakdown. I quit working on it last time once I reached that part, but now I have the foundation for the whole thing now which I hope you will be pleased with. Let me know :)
Hey man, sorry that my respond is so late, have tons of requests on top of my studio time (do you think that this was good excuse?)
Going back to your latest production concept/idea --> nice, clean, slowly developing melodic motive and interestingly structured, so far --> few cool ideas with this suspended atmo in it - like it!!!
Cheers,
Darek
Vancouver
I think this is a solid track. No critiques from me
