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Please give construtive feedback on this song: Prosperity
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| arskinetica |
Hi there!
I'd really like some construction criticism of this piece, so I can get better at this stuff.
It's a combo of prog house, trance, and whatever Vangelis is considered.
http://snd.sc/hiNjj5 |
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| mathieu |
| where's the link dude? |
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| Storyteller |
| The strings are a gazillion times to loud. You almost can't hear the beat. Everything sounds like it is clipping really really hard. Fix that and then we can actually try and listen ;). |
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| arskinetica |
I'm running into the loudness war thing.
I want it to be clear be loud.
Thanks for your honesty.
Any advice? |
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| arskinetica |
| I'll rewire Record to Ableton and do a mix there. |
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| Storyteller |
| Don't worry about loudness. Make it sound good without anything on the master first. It's really really far off from where on should want it to be right now unfortunately. |
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| arskinetica |
I totally agree.
I was too focused on that, and it does sound as clippy as you said. Wow. Guess I was too enamored with "hey, this sounds kind of neat and stuff"
Can't have a good project if the production sucks before the mastering stage. |
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| 112268 |
| quote: | Originally posted by arskinetica
I want it to be clear be loud.
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which ones is it? you cant have both. |
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| arskinetica |
Ah.
I've noticed though, that a ton of commercial records just sound huge and airy. |
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| 112268 |
| quote: | Originally posted by arskinetica
Ah.
I've noticed though, that a ton of commercial records just sound huge and airy. |
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listen again. its one or the other. |
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| arskinetica |
| I'll try a couple things. |
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