TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion NeW track i made, feedback please :) View this Thread in Original format Xorimanguer if you could tell me what could i improve and stuff would be nice, thanks :) http://soundcloud.com/oscar-alvarad...ng-to-the-bench Excess my first thought is that the arp is too fast for the melody/song. might just be me but if slowed down i think it would be more suited. the bassline needs to be more interesting as well, maybe something deeper sounding and sidechained to a 4/4 trigger to give it a swelling feel after that do throw in some more layers of percussion to give the track more flow, and you've got yourself a decent track IMO Xorimanguer okay thanks!!! i changed it a bit tell me if u like it or smthn xD http://soundcloud.com/oscar-alvarado/were-going-to-the-bench CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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