potential - this one has it. loads of great stuff going on, quite entertaining for the ears.
i definitely look forward to a full version if you plan on finishing this one up.
the only thing i'd want changed in this is the bassline, well not changed but given more spice through automation and maybe some random glitchy stuff.
Vancouver
good work man! this is actually the style of EDM that I like the most. Everything sounds very good and tight. If I was to make any critisism it would be to add in one of your soulfull melodys (I know you make nice ones from your other tracks) This track starts off great but Im wondering if it might not stand out without a real solid melody hook. nice one tho
Evolve140
Yeah this and 2 others at the moment I plan on finishing. Then 3 more I have on another computer. Glad you like it, def. will consider the feedback.
Mandelbrot11235
The kick is a little much for me. You're obviously going for that sort of stable, forceful beat but at least to my ears it feels overpowering, especially since it's there most of the track. But whatever you decide for that, it's a solid track even right now.
Raphie
Nice one! powerfull, curious how this evolves
Beatflux
I want to haer a finished track for once.
Evolve140
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Originally posted by Beatflux
I want to haer a finished track for once.
I have a couple that are finished, one of them just got back from mastering. May just post it.
This track was made spontaneously, though I've slated it for completion. Been working on it a little every day since I started it. It's nice people like it, I've been getting lots of positive feedback, which makes it pretty much necessary to finish it.
Seandroid
Not sure if I like the kick sample but this is a pretty cool track. The square bass you use reminds me of knockout by Cirez D and some of the stuff by BSOD.
Especially at 1:30
Evolve140
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Originally posted by Vancouver
good work man! this is actually the style of EDM that I like the most. Everything sounds very good and tight. If I was to make any critisism it would be to add in one of your soulfull melodys (I know you make nice ones from your other tracks) This track starts off great but Im wondering if it might not stand out without a real solid melody hook. nice one tho
Thanks for checking guys, here's the work I've done on it.
Man this is STUNNING and had me rockin my ass about. Really very cool, clean and chugging.
BUT it's a track of 2 halves.
It's just about a perfect track for me up to 2.45, but then for me it goes all sappy. Don't be put out, this first halve shows me you are right up there. Just do something better with it!
Fell free to jog my memory to re - listen if you re - work it.
candybag
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Originally posted by Evolve140
Thanks for checking guys, here's the work I've done on it.
Definitly feels like two tracks in one, of which both have potential. The first part reminds me alot of DK8's "Murder was the bass" with that square bassline and oomphy kick.. hell, even the percussion. If i were you i'd either continue with what you got and not elaborate it as much. Just stretch it out and let it run its course... or, i'd just go nuts, adding a new element (synth, fx, whatever) to play along as a "mainlead." Maybe add some twisted drops and go a more original way, even if it means wandering into some other sub-electro genre.
The other part... i can't stop thinking about adding vocals, or perhaps an acoustic guitarr with lots of release/reverb doing simple harmonics.
