A friend of mine proposed that I attempt to remix a song she liked, this is my work...
This also happens to be the first track that I produced that I post up here, I usually keep my productions private and between friends... I hope this isnt a total fail. *closes eyes*
All feedback would be greatly appreciated since this is my first post.
wizniz
i like the spaciness of it and the minimal sound you've got.
i'd do something a little more rhythmic with the vocals or mix them in a way that would make them sit better with the rest of the arrangement, tho. thanks for sharing
Vlad
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Originally posted by wizniz
i like the spaciness of it and the minimal sound you've got.
i'd do something a little more rhythmic with the vocals or mix them in a way that would make them sit better with the rest of the arrangement, tho. thanks for sharing
Thanks for the input.
Im trying to figure out what to do with the vocals, I tried to sit the rhythm into the vocals. =\
Im not french, so I have no idea what the words are, gonna have to shred up the vocals by ear. :p
Raphie
The vocals have really nothing to do with this track, single has been a huge hit over here i think like 2 years ago, you killed the vibe totally.
though the instrumental track on it's own is not that bad.
If you want to do alors un dance, you need vocal, lead stab and sax sample and stick to verse & chorus structure. THAT's alore un dance, this is putting the accapella on top of a different instrumental track for the sake of it, with no connection and put a synced delay on it......
You could try to position it as some vague dub version, but it's even too far of really to pull that off, fix the connection with the original.
Vlad
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Originally posted by Raphie
The vocals have really nothing to do with this track, single has been a huge hit over here i think like 2 years ago, you killed the vibe totally.
though the instrumental track on it's own is not that bad.
If you want to do alors un dance, you need vocal, lead stab and sax sample and stick to verse & chorus structure. THAT's alore un dance, this is putting the accapella on top of a different instrumental track for the sake of it, with no connection and put a synced delay on it......
You could try to position it as some vague dub version, but it's even too far of really to pull that off, fix the connection with the original.
I guess than I gotta call it something else until I can find rips of that stuff. :p
Oh well, at least youre liking the instrumental... which is really what I was most worried about, however, I will try to link the original with this current "dubbed" version.
