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Done tune - any thoughts?
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| Beatflux |
Synthline at 1:22 sounds familiar, and out of place.
Otherwise there is a nice groove. |
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| Owsey |
I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but the sharp tone sits well on my humble PC speakers, without reaching a point I'd consider harsh.
As for that lead section at 1.22 - I remember you guys using this in another piece, but with more focus on it. I really liked it in the previous context, though I agree with Beatflux this time around.
Ultimately I find your work more interesting than the general piece of dance music. Always a solid choice of synthwork. Kudos! |
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| Evolve140 |
| I think all that noise and grain in the background fx kind of takes away from the groove a bit. That synth at 1:32 is a bit out of place. I'm also not a fan of the robitic aututune voice. Not sure what it is but there is some pretty stiff compression around 2:35. The chords are def. good, but I think the buildup needs more refinement because there is a bit of messyness in the mixdown with all the effects and stuff. I like the groove once it gets going, but I think you should focus more on the groove and not so much the FX which I think are a little over the top. |
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| Seandroid |
Yeah I definitely agree with Beatflux about the synth at 1:21 sounding out of place.
It sounds a little busy. There's too much going on at the same time in the background. I actually like the vocal samples but it think you could clean them up a bit.
Over all I like the track, but I definitely prefer both "You Ain't Nut'in" and "Funnybad." |
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| kolleamm |
| The tracks not bad really and I don't really think the synth at 1:22 is out of place. My only suggestion is to not make the lyrics not so repetative other tha that, good job! |
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| Richard Butler |
| Great advice everyone. Looking to clean this is up a ton, and will repost once happy. Have chopped out most of vocals already. |
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