the bass needs some work i know that but still i am happy with what i have right here :)
Chaz Cunningham
Excellent work. The guitar riff is extremely well-written. As a whole, however, I think it can be draining because even though repetition is fine, especially for trance, it appears that the song is based off a 2-chord progression. If it were, say, 3 or 4 chords, not only would it be less tedious, it would also broaden the song for more material, and perhaps even allow you to lengthen it to the likes of 6 or 7 minutes. But really very good, well-written. Perhaps more work on the low-shelf bass work like you mentioned yourself, but excellent work.
DLovas
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Originally posted by Chaz Cunningham
Excellent work. The guitar riff is extremely well-written. As a whole, however, I think it can be draining because even though repetition is fine, especially for trance, it appears that the song is based off a 2-chord progression. If it were, say, 3 or 4 chords, not only would it be less tedious, it would also broaden the song for more material, and perhaps even allow you to lengthen it to the likes of 6 or 7 minutes. But really very good, well-written. Perhaps more work on the low-shelf bass work like you mentioned yourself, but excellent work.
thanks man means a lot
Chaz Cunningham
Of course man.
5oundbite
i think the drums are drowning a bit in the guitar sounds and the bass is a bit to weak to me ear, besides that sweet vibe, this song got lots of potential
DLovas
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Originally posted by 5oundbite
i think the drums are drowning a bit in the guitar sounds and the bass is a bit to weak to me ear, besides that sweet vibe, this song got lots of potential
thanks man - i just purchased this sweet bass plugin from spectrasonics called trilian so that should fix up the bass, and as for the drums - i'll have a shot at mastering em a bit nicer so that the guitar sound sticks i. thanks for your feedback :)
