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| ryanleeyeoman |
hey man, some potential im hearing thus far, i like the melody and plucks but the bassline throws the feel off when it comes in... Try layering some more sound in there, sounds very incomplete. I'd advise finishing more of the song structure before posting for constructive criticism, just a thought!
best wishes, keep it up! |
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| Nemesis44 |
Hmmmm... well, there is something about the bass line that just doesn't sit right for me. The track works on a melodic level but because the progression in the line is too quick it makes it sound a bit like Wigfield - Saturday Night in my ears (Yeah, I know I'm a strange cat). Just sounds a little frantic perhaps.
Harmonically the track works though and I like the rest of the composition.
Keep at it though as the foundation for the track seems to be built on a solid idea.
Thanks for sharing
Cheers
Nem |
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