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| MIKE333ACE |
| Please give any feedback about this song on what you liked or what can be improved. thanks :) |
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| DJRYAN™ |
| awesome track. it does sound a little muffled. I'd open it up a little. Other than that, where it cuts out at the end of the track, I'd drop it one more time just for a phrase or two more but overall solid very solid- I like it. |
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| Raphie |
Nice track potential, bit of the Paul Miller / Simon Patterson old style drums / bassline arps which i like.
Stuff i would like to see improved:
- The melody doesn't do it for me, i find it a bit bland, while being an overload of delay and triggers arps. (some of them are off key as well)
- there are just too many NEXUS layers on top, your track is flooding in reverb and delay, making it very tiring to listen to.
- There is too much compression/limiting, even in the break, you can hear the compression kicking in when layers are introduced, then the rest is pushed to the back severely, try to listen very critically to make sure that you don't hear this anywhere and then back off compression even a bit more......
- Try some low cut, in order to clean up some of the mud in the bottom end of the track, so your track can breathe a bit.
- personal note, I know NEXUS quite well and try to stay away from just triggering arp patterns with long sustained notes, either create your own pattern, or do something else, but the NEXUS preset arps have been used to death.
- On a postive note, you seem to be able to put the right vibe together, which is good, now just work on the quality and melody of the track |
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| MIKE333ACE |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Nice track potential, bit of the Paul Miller / Simon Patterson old style drums / bassline arps which i like.
Stuff i would like to see improved:
- The melody doesn't do it for me, i find it a bit bland, while being an overload of delay and triggers arps. (some of them are off key as well)
- there are just too many NEXUS layers on top, your track is flooding in reverb and delay, making it very tiring to listen to.
- There is too much compression/limiting, even in the break, you can hear the compression kicking in when layers are introduced, then the rest is pushed to the back severely, try to listen very critically to make sure that you don't hear this anywhere and then back off compression even a bit more......
- Try some low cut, in order to clean up some of the mud in the bottom end of the track, so your track can breathe a bit.
- personal note, I know NEXUS quite well and try to stay away from just triggering arp patterns with long sustained notes, either create your own pattern, or do something else, but the NEXUS preset arps have been used to death.
- On a postive note, you seem to be able to put the right vibe together, which is good, now just work on the quality and melody of the track |
Thankyou very much for this advice, i will definantly use it in my next track :) |
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| vt100 |
| hey man - I dig the track so far. The two things that would help me out a bit would be some more melody and somehow opening the track up, getting it pumping a bit more. |
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