Hello ! This is my 2nd attempt to make a track. I almost finished it, so let me know what do you think so far. Suggestions, tips, tricks and criticism are welcomed!
P.S.: I have no gear :(... only a PC with a Intel 2.4 dual core and a glued pair of Panasonic rp dj300.
Energy_3
I don't mind it man, i am more into hard trance but it sounds nice, and progressive. if your new to producing keep at it...! I only listened on my laptop to so thats about all the feed back i can give you.
Zeus Alvarado
This track sounds very chilled, I love stuff like this. Sounds like something that could go on Tritonals air up there radio :toocool: Unfortunately I still considered myself too inexperienced to provide help with mixing, but I do feel like this track can become very pro. Send this bad boy to a mastering engineer!
Also, I too don't have any gear, so I feel your pain bud lol Im looking to get an APC40 soon so I can produce and DJ with. I recall seeing a vid of Arty who said he uses no gear either, but look where he has ended up at! Hit me up when your finished with the track, can't wait to hear the finished piece :happy2:
Tomasz-The1
Indeed. For a 2nd attempt - this is really good stuff.
What setup are you using?
Really impressed - Nice job!
JeeDSounds
Agreed. Really nice track ! :D
Constantin
After weeks and weeks of slacking I decided to finalize this project.
I've done some small changes in the arrangement, re EQ-ed most of the tracks and reworked a little bit the percussion.
Criticism and tips are welcomed !
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Originally posted by Tomasz-The1
Indeed. For a 2nd attempt - this is really good stuff.
What setup are you using?
Really impressed - Nice job!
I have no setup, just a crappy PC, 2 pairs of cheap headphones that sound like they'r falling apart and a cheap 2.1 system. I think Fruity Loops is more expensive them my whole "setup".
Thank you all for the previous offered feedback !
sicc
I believe I remember you posting little clips of this track a long time a go, and I reallly liked them. Like, damn, for your second time producing I dont know what to say. I almost don't believe you! My only crit would be to tame the lead that comes in after the brakedown, maybe mix it down a bit, its a bit hot, and loud. very nice work though kind sir.
evo8
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Originally posted by Constantin
After weeks and weeks of slacking I decided to finalize this project.
I've done some small changes in the arrangement, re EQ-ed most of the tracks and reworked a little bit the percussion.
Criticism and tips are welcomed !
I have no setup, just a crappy PC, 2 pairs of cheap headphones that sound like they'r falling apart and a cheap 2.1 system. I think Fruity Loops is more expensive them my whole "setup".
Thank you all for the previous offered feedback !
not bad at all - i think if the kick came up a bit more it would be a better tune
Excess
indeed the kick is low in the mix and could probably use some more low end as well. however, i LOVE the track itself and if you can keep up finishing projects off, you'll definitely keep getting better and better - and you're not far off from truly quality work.
invest in some studio headphones and a soundcard! that will help greatly and you'll be able to hear the flaws in your mixdown
vt100
well, your second track sounds a lot better than my second track. Thanks for sharing man, sounds good.
