Mix wise sounds pretty good on my work consumer speakers. Like the bass warmth here.
I like the track but to be picky (and personal) it could use some sections where it's a little less samey - so, the synths stop and it's just bass and percs with 3 massive HOME MADE layered upswrews or such like.
TranceLover007
Nicely done so far man, cool sidechain idea right from the begging.
You melody would definitely benefit from some additional chords changes (around 1:40).
I thing, this could be ready for sending to some labels if you can create/add really sweet and catch lead pattern around 4:00 min
Great work Michael, impressive so far.
Cheers,
Darek
Energy Flow
good track! nice sidechain right from the start and really like the bassline at 3.48 and the vocal sounds that come in at the end.
could do with some more variation as previously suggested though.
overall really good track.
cheers