Could be really cool, but in my opinion, I'm not a fan of your synth choices. The rest sounds alright, but its hard to judge as I feel like your synths is so devoid of life and basic presets.
Evolve140
For me, the whole first 3 minutes needs way more energy. It's just a little dry and too flat like the other guy mentioned with the plain sounding synths. The mixdown seems to be OK which is good but the instruments are a little lackluster, drop around 4:50 is cool but, seems a little muddy and digital sounding.