| Evolve140 |
Everything seems ok at first, loopy perc line. Too wet on that bassline you bring in. The chorus makes it too wide to sufficiently occupy the bottom range it occupies in the octave range. That sine wave arpeggio is pretty bad. The middle octave sound is kind of obnoxious, the envelope and tone, it's just too much and too repititious for that sound item in my opinion. It's the breakdown, why cut out the bottom end of the piano?
Idea seems to be there, but your mixdown is rather subpar moment so I would focus on that the most. Some elements are sufficient but others are lacking, for instance the synth that I mentioned is so dry and not really EQ'd so it sits in this awkward forefront position in the mix. It could be sound selection or simply just mixdown issues, or a combination. Idea is solid, no huge issues except that arpeggio lead dominating the mix so much. Hard to tell, mixdown needs some love, passages and transitions could use a little more finesse. |
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