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| sk8athug |
its just something i came up with while i was experimenting with FL.
http://www.geocities.com/darkstar_z/thing.mp3
right click --> save as
i just want your comments (either bad or good), and if how i can improve it.
thanks... |
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| Vizay |
that synth sounds really good but... (the usual but)
I'n my opinion the kick sounds to....to...to spacey if ya get what i mean....it needs to be harder....not so hollow
maybe you should try to mae the lead a bit phatter to....read the exploration of sound thread....you have some really good advice there :) |
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| Endre |
i�d say more melody.
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Ahh, the instantly recognizable FruityLoop sound... |
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| Vizay |
| Mr.Mystery you are always so possitive about everything ;) |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vizay
Mr.Mystery you are always so possitive about everything ;) |
lol, yeah, I know :stongue:
What I meant to say was:
The melody is excellent but the synth patch is too easily recognizable... |
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| Vizay |
heh...i just noticed one thing.....that sample somehow makes me think of picottos back to cali (push remix) =)
it's kind of built in the same way or something :)
but pleeeeeeease....change the kick :p |
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| tranzMental |
Hey, I'm just bumpin this thread, cuz I'm a newbie Trance Producer myself. Mr.Mystery pointed out that 'Fruity' sound. Yeah, the plugin's highly recognizable, that's for sure.
But, I wanna get on topic. First of all, my opinion about it, is that I FEEL the melody is great. When you started adding more bit's and pieces to the song itself, it started to sound alive. Then you added FX (Cuz the first bit sounded 'hollow' sort ta speak).
BUT, my question to you guys is; how do you know if a kick fit's in a song? I'm gonna make a thread bout this NE Wayz, but, at the same time, I wanted to comment about this. NE Wayz, peace out. |
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| sk8athug |
Yo, Im back...didnt have much time to fix the song, but i managed.
http://www.geocities.com/darkstar_z/thing3.mp3
right click --> save as
Mr. Mystery: Yea i noticed that too, now Im gonna try to make it sound more unique.
Vizay: yea it does sound like Picottos melody, even though i made it before hearing his track.
tranzMental: thanks, i have the same question too.
and i got an offtopic question:
what exacly does the bitrate do? I mean like what if its higher? lower? |
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| 69 KrAzY G 69 |
| it sounds kinda spacy, its not mny kind of trance like the synths sound how would i say cheeesy to me...maybee if u like space it out more and sorta echo them more. |
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