I had been slacking off due to work and other things taking up time in my life, but since it's the end of summer and I have had a bit of free time in the past couple weeks, I decided to get back into producing a little bit. Please give it a listen and tell me what you think about it. I'm especially interested in thoughts on the composition/structure of the song, since I always have trouble nailing that, but any and all comments/criticism are appreciated!
I really like this, great sound. The high pass bit at 2:25 felt a bit necessary or overdone to me though. The breakdown has some really cool sounds in it, I'm definitely liking it a lot. Good climax, a lot of drive behind it. The synth that comes in at 6:20 feels a bit harsh. Also, that mini breakdown kinda broke the energy of the climax for me.
The melodies and structure are good in my opinion, but I think you need to work on the final polish. Make the track shine, clean it up a bit so it sounds less muddy. You have a ton of potential here, I really like this track so far. Keep up the great work :)
Andyman3k
I agree about the part at 2:25. It seems a little too sudden, maybe bring the low cut in all the way from 0 Hz instead of switching it on instantly at a higher frequency.
Again at 6:20, the volume drop on the bass seems a bit drastic and sudden, but it's not horrible.
Overall however, it's a great track, really well done!