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My newest track
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| kolleamm |
(THE NEW VERSION IS BELOW)
Hey all, if you have time please listen to my track and tell me what you think, or how I can improve it. Any feedback would be great, Thanks a million! |
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| Port12 |
Very cool style, I like it!
In general the sounds are very well-chosen. I wasn't too fond of the snare that does the fill at 20 seconds. I love the overall atmosphere created by the synths and the sidechaining, etc.
My one real suggestion is to add some melodic/chord progression to the song. I'm the kind of guy who needs a song to be moving melodically to stay interested. Well, maybe not "needs;" I still think the song is good, but if the song had a catchy melodic progression with it's cool atmosphere and solid groove, I would really dig it quite a bit.
Hope that helps! Please post again if you make any changes to the song~ |
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| kolleamm |
Very good advice!
Yea I knew that snare sounded a bit out of place.
I'm going to take your suggestion and also try and add a melody to the track.
Thanks again for the feedback I really appreciate it. |
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| Cedric K. |
hey man, i must say i really like the tune!
something i've never heard before, the kick works perfectly together with the other synths, especially the part from 1.01 - 1.23 is very cool! aaaand the vocal chops are amazing but i think u should use more "smacking" percussions. the background cymbals are decent but i think it still needs a bit more of a snare etc.
very cool tune though :) |
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| kolleamm |
Alright everyone, the edited version of Trance Waves is ready, I kept everyone's advice close in mind while editing it too. I just wanna say thanks to all who commented and gave their opinions! I really appreciate it. I look forward to hearing what you think, here is the link.
http://soundcloud.com/amadeusbojiuc...-trance-waves-1 |
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