Quite a nice dark flavour, but nothing like enough evolution and journey. Check out some recent tracks by Tom Laws and see how with just percs and bass you can set up a winding building journey - then couple this with your melodic ideas.
Think about your hatz for example - it seems like just a repeating loop. Instead it could be a gradual assembly of hats, some of which only make an appearance once in every 2 bars. This way you make something of love and care and thought.
Keep working fella
Excess
sup brahs
gave my feedback on the misc, and agree with the dirtboxer up there :D
