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[Melo Trance] WIP Need Feedback
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| Rodri Santos |
This time i went for something more melodic but i need some extra ears in order to finish the track, i feel that the bass + kick it's quite thumping which is fine for me don't know what you feel, not so sure about the high shelf which i found a bit dull.
About the arrangement i am not happy with the breakdown/build thing is that i don't want another generic orchestal breakdown but i am out of ideas so now it's quite simple yet probably not effective.
Any critics? |
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| Evolve140 |
| The drums don't groove, and in the loop they seem to fall out of place timing wise in parts. The bassline kind of wiggles around strangely in certain parts, too. Melo is decent. Mixdown is kind of iffy though. |
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| Richard Butler |
The bit from about 2 minutes, for a while there has a satisfying uplifting feel I really like, but somehow this is not complimented either side of this portion.
In this good part it sounds all round whole and emmotional. The bassline is slightly too lumpy / loud there though and that hi pitched fx noise is too loud.
There's a decent track in the section I like.
The drop is not working mate, it somehow looses everything that the early portion (the bit I like) had. |
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