Just thought id share another Ambient inspired track. I've kept this very mellow, with driving percussion and a more complex bassline. The bassline itself has many layers, and again I spent most of my effort into the atmosphere creating my own world of sound. I understand that the melody still needs some work though, but here is something for now.
I don't expect comments, i have not been very active with feedback as of late but if you care to listen its appreciated.
Kind Regards,
Shane.
Richard Butler
The 2 main parts just before and after the break are very good indeed, pretty haunting mate. Love this warm mix too.
The break FOR ME is a nothing break, I'd skip it, but this is a taste thang is all.
The intro first halve cvould be a bit more funky - to me there is a dange people my switch off as the intro doesn't really hint at the quality to come, for example those choir type sounds are very basic and a bit clumsy.
I'm being super picky, overall very skilled work mate.
M.O
Great track! This is Trance i love :) break is awesome (IMO) :)
Kick could be a bit stronger on low frequancies. It's not full track, isn't it? because if it is you must make it longer :D
sonify
@ Richard Butler: Thanks man. I really appreciate your honest opinion. No way will i take it the wrong way, your comments are going to help me. Overall im glad you enjoyed it though. I'll be taking your thoughts into consideration :)
@ M.O This is just a preview sample, the track is a DJ friendly version with more. Thanks for your time in listening and commenting :)
