I'm quite interested in the part after the mini break, like the cleanliness and the interplay between bacck and kick - nice kick btw.
Would be even better (imo) with a little touch that embues a sense of the real world / the organic / some real world roominess, am I making sense? Just to add that special something.
Your mixing is getting good mate.
Evolve140
Ty, feedback helps a lot, and yeah I know what you mean. :D Latest progress here... post breakdown
There is something really special about this track that grabs my attention and play with my imagination, this is really danger phenomena lol, really nice atmosphere and slowly but beautifully develop melodic arrangement --> I think that you are going right direction with this production.
Darek
Evolve140
Thanks guys, feedback is very much appreciated.
Got some feedback from one of my producer friends, he basically thought it needed more energy, so I worked on it and this is what I have. :)
This is really good, I would play this out, as Darek said, it has something really good that captures the imagination.
Cheers
Nem
Richard v W
Nice and deep :) I like it.
Few things I could think of: The bass is full, but a bit too much. It's a bit tyring to my ears. I recommend making it a bit tighter.
Also with the kind of hickup sounds in the beat you might want to add an instrument that goes over it without too much sidechaining on it to smoothen things up. Like strings or an arp.
Overall nice sounds here :)
Evolve140
thanks a lot everyone for the feedback, means a lot :) cheers