Yes. It's pretty decent. It needs a bass-line and kick along with the rest of percussion could come up a little - kick, more-so - but as ideas go, it's got a solid foundation.
gordan100
Thanks for listening, and for constructive criticism. I'll try to add bass line, to spice it up a little.
"It has good solid foundation" - i'm good :)
Still learning and playing with sounds, with no intention to become a pro producer. It's to much time consuming and it doesn't fit in with other stuff i do. But from time to time i get an urge to play something.
And i really like that old quality trance which is gone now (c.j. boland, planisphere, union jack...).
Thanks for comment again, appreciate it...
Snake31
The melody and beat is good, but it definitely needs more. The panning lead could be used for intro purposes, but I think you should ditch it in your main groove. It gets old pretty quick. Also, there's some harsh tones coming through that lead when you adjust the low pass filter on it. Try equalizing it.
Here is one of my older. It's raw, production and arrangement are bad, main "melody" comes in to quickly, but i still like it - think it has some originality. Maybe in the hands of a better producer... :)
