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pls listen..:)
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| John |
hey all,
i was just wondering if there is anyone who wants to listen to my stuff and give some comments on it:) its not as good as stuff ive downloaded here from some of you, but hey, everyone has to start somewhere heheh..you can download my song here: http://kem.hapklaar.com/gi0vann1/Du...Storm_beta1.mp3
for some reason there is a lack of high frequencies..also the percussion and the strings are a bit weak and the melody is too simple heheh, ah well... pls give it a try:D
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| John |
| aah come on..anyone? :( |
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| big dave |
| thats a mint track for your first attempt! :D i like the bouncy kind of bass that kicks in around 15 seconds! i also like the atmospheric kind of lead youve used that kicks in around the minute mark! nice arrangement but i feel its kind of lightweight! i dont know i think its a bit too long without enough depth to it, need a bit more harder, driving part to it to give it something more! but well done :D |
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| kilano |
| I like your song. Just like you sad the melody is pretty simple, but it sounds good. It sounds like a commercial tune. But I think your really succeeded in the sounds you use. I like your synths. How did you make this or what programm did you use. |
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| John |
heey
thanks for replying:) and even more for postive replies:D
i used reason 2.0 to make this track..
and it is not really my first attempt.. i made some stuff with fruity loops and i installed reason 1.0, but i didnt understand the program at that time hehe (theres still so much to learn though, the program is so extensive). but this is the first track i finished completely:)
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| Mr.Mystery |
Okay, criticism first:
-The drumline needs more punch
-Needs more "meat" around the "bones" if you know what I mean (a warmer pad or something)
-Too much reverb on the main lead... and percussion (?)
-The title? What's up with that?! :stongue:
That being said, the tune is certainly slightly on the better side of the "average"-mark.
It has pretty good potential but it lacks that final "kick in the ass" (so to speak).
You - hum - wouldn't mind if I remixed it, would you? :) |
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| John |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Okay, criticism first:
-The drumline needs more punch
-Needs more "meat" around the "bones" if you know what I mean (a warmer pad or something)
-Too much reverb on the main lead... and percussion (?)
-The title? What's up with that?! :stongue:
That being said, the tune is certainly slightly on the better side of the "average"-mark.
It has pretty good potential but it lacks that final "kick in the ass" (so to speak).
You - hum - wouldn't mind if I remixed it, would you? :) |
would be cool if you want to make a remix of it:) e-mail me if you need the .rsn file [email protected]
and about the title:D...i don't know one (yet)..and i was dying for a beer last night so..i dont think using my real name as an alias to make music isnt such a good idea...but ah well.. everything on its time:)
ill try to change things a bit later, with yours and bid dave's criticism in mind:)
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| cHiLD |
| I like it. Its simple melody makes it addictive. I agree that it sounds kinda commercial, like the stuff they play on the radio here occasionally. |
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| milanster |
i think its pretty good actually, it needs some improvements, its also switching @ some parts.
i dont think it sounds commercial at all, its just a typical trance tune but i think u could give it a better name. "have another beer?" sounds like a housey tune or maybe even techno
in all its pretty good as i said, and it certainly is above avg! ;)
good job mate |
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| milanster |
| quote: | Originally posted by milanster
its also switching @ some parts.
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i mean:
its also FAST switching @ some parts :p |
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| John |
| quote: | Originally posted by milanster
i mean:
its also FAST switching @ some parts :p |
yeah i noticed that myself also heheh, ill work on that when ive got some time:)
i will work on the title..(and also on an alias :haha:)
i dunno what to say on the commercial stuff tho hehe
thnx for input all
john
edit: title/alias probs solved :) (id3 is still the same tho..) |
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