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Can someone rate how clean this is?
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| Mr. Le |
I've been trying really hard to clear up my music, to the extent that I am taking way too long to produce anything. It would be very helpful to hear any and all criticism. Thanks again!
Silicon (unfinished) |
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| Sh!fty |
sounded promising in the beginning (nice bass)
buildup is a bit boring. the bassline could use the lower layer much sooner
the lower base should be a saw (dirtier) instead of a sin for my taste
the piano was very dry ... melody was cheezy
the pad --> beautiful... nothing to add here
bass line coming in the break was nice too
kick dropping in... to few energy... |
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| XDR |
I have to agree with Sh!fty.
As for how clean it sounds, it sounds pretty clean to me but it's clear that your focus should now be on composition and arrangement. |
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