TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion New trance track want feedback all feedback returned thanks View this Thread in Original format neilferry http://soundcloud.com/neilferry/neil-ferry-u-o theres the link to the track on my soundcloud account. Richard Butler Here's the embedded SC so more people will listen Neil Ferry_ U-O by NeilFerry I like the syle and clarity here. Watch the amplitude of the bass when you often open the filter - you need to ride the volume so when the filter opens it doesn't go so comparitively louder. Good clear mixing - but the track needs more going on to make it whole. Keep up the good work. EddieZilker While I agree that there needs to be more stuff going on (hi-hats, alone, would really help the track), I really like what's happening, already. The kick does feel a little on the anemic side. Also, the break feels tacked on. Consider doing without it. It's completely unnecessary, as it is. While it has some lovely melodic ideas, they don't inherently relate to the drop and the break kills some of the track's momentum. Keep at it, though. Looking forward to hearing progression/finished product. neilferry thanks guys for the feedback much appreciated i must get back in and fix up the track addmy hi hats fix my bass and change the breakdown and then il post up my fixed up track :) CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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