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Maksim Afimov - Lina
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| MaksimAfimov |
Hello tranceaddict. Here is one of my last track's for your attention. Comment's and critics are welcome.
Maksim Afimov - Lina |
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| Jemuel Pavlic |
Track starts with a nice groove, and I'm enjoying those arps/plucks moving up in frequency, nice melody. The melody that comes in at 1:28.. maybe a little less feedback on the delay? I want to hear that high note it hits at the end of the bar better, but it is getting covered and drowned out by the echoes of the previous note. The high pitched instrument that comes in at 1:58 and continues through the breakdown could use a bit of EQing as it's peaking, and hurting my ears a bit. Between that and the melody that comes it at 3:12 (Which I enjoy by the way) could use a bit of transition. Also, that melody ends a bit abruptly too. I think you need to smooth out your transitions a bit more, they're a bit sudden.
Great sounding buildup. Very chilled beat. I wish you would have done a little more with the climax, though, because it's the same thing as before the breakdown. Also, the bass drop at the end was kinda unnecessary.
Overall, I really like the ideas in this track and the very chilled mix. It has great potential and just needs a bit tweaking here and there, and you'll have a nice track. |
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| MaksimAfimov |
Thanks for the detailed comment.
about the strong-sounding tunes, I did not have any experience with an equalizer, so the frequencies until most key problems.
It's only just my second job. I'm shure make all bugs and suggestions, you described and try to use in my next tracks |
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