I have remixed Sky Motion's track "Autumn Dreams", released on Blue SoHo back in 2010. I need some feedback before I am going to "officialy" release it :)
Keep in mind that I haven't fully mastered the track yet and that there might be a part that needs to be improved, but it's almost ready to go.
It's being made in FL Studio, for the people who would like to know.
A small note: when the bassdrum starts to roll and the synths sort of "mute", it's an issue with the sidechaining. I have to fix that.
Hope you guys like it, and please give me feedback which is useful so I can improve the track! :)
And I'm 14 years old, so don't expect a perfectly mastered, professional track released on Armada Music. I did my best to do that though ;)
tatsama
hi there..just had a listen...i think the mix is pretty decent..my only crtic is that the breakdown could use a stronger lead in there..at the moment it seems to wander a lil aimlessly during the break...good work over all.
Skyler_Music
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Originally posted by tatsama
hi there..just had a listen...i think the mix is pretty decent..my only crtic is that the breakdown could use a stronger lead in there..at the moment it seems to wander a lil aimlessly during the break...good work over all.
Ah, okay. Thanks.
I'll give it a more stable progression as well.
I thought a Ban Di (chinese flute) would fit the breakdown, but I'll layer more sounds in it.
runawaywaffle3
its a nicely done remix man.
my only problem with it is that i can probably find thousands of trance songs identical to it.
on your next track try to do something that sets you apart from the rest, be it a certain sound or style of melody. because obviously you have achieved "the sound" so make it your own. :D well done though
Richard Butler
For me the kick is not very nice, very wooden and knocking. Maybe it's ok for others?
Skyler_Music
quote:
Originally posted by runawaywaffle3
its a nicely done remix man.
my only problem with it is that i can probably find thousands of trance songs identical to it.
on your next track try to do something that sets you apart from the rest, be it a certain sound or style of melody. because obviously you have achieved "the sound" so make it your own. :D well done though
Well, the track I chose to remix has a very generic melody and chord progression, so that makes it less original. I'm trying to get something more creative and original track going on next time :)
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
For me the kick is not very nice, very wooden and knocking. Maybe it's ok for others?
Might be that the compression or EQ of the kick is too hard. I'll be checking that out as well.
